it feels
that you pile up bricks and put the cement
build a wall when my thought and feel reach you
and it seems your smile
not the truest smile
you want to give
and you have
and when I show you my all
you seem surprised to see many faces you never know
I just feel
to be honest and the truth
really matter if I want to reach you
because I want you to know
pleasant face is not the only one I have
because I do have
angry, rude, picky, moody, lazy, and sad faces
because I do have
tears, blood, fear, and sweat
because all of these are the real me
yes... it is me
and when I tell myself
that I am afraid to hurt you when I reach you
that is just a big, big lie, lie, and lie
because really scared I am to be hurt
and go weak my heart to see the truth
even I know all these things are irrelevant
even I know that God will lead my way
I just can't help to be afraid
of the pain
so will I face the sun or turn back to shadow??
I just want to find the courage
to walk this road
till the end of it
Bandung
14th March 2007 - 02.05
Updated - 20th March 2007:
Correcting typing mistake, thanks to Ujay.
10 comments:
"till the of it"
do you mean "till the end of it"??
apakah ini tentang perbedaan yang pernah lo ceritakan waktu itu?
*gw sotoy dan tidak terlalu pintar dalam mengerti puisi..hehe sorry*
semangat, di! ^_^
Anyway di..
Ketika baca puisi lo, gw merasa itu cukup merepresentasikan perasaan gw. Entah apa yang kita rasakan sama apa engga. Tapi gw juga ngerasa kalo gw harus bisa untuk mengatakan "yes..it is me" Walaupun gw sebenarnya takut..
IT FEELS.
bait keduanya..
mengena sekali..
nicely described..
wish he could read that part..
the more I read it,
the more I love it.
*ko isinya gw semua ya?
-> wulan/ujay:
Udah dibenerin Jay. Yah kurang lebih karena masalah perbedaan itu. Woi jangan spamming di sini :P
-> lisiani:
It's she not he :)
dee..kayanya yang dimaksud lisiani adalah cowonya deh..dia ngarep cowonya ngebaca bait itu (walaupun gw jd sempet mikir lo suka cowo juga siy :D)
-> wulan/ujay:
Cowonya gimana sih?? Maksudnya cowonya Lisiani gitu?? Chaa.. lo bisa menjelaskan ini tak?? :)
Sial lo Jay.
hadirr...
*ngakak*
hahahahaha errr...gue abstain aja boleh???
takut menimbulkan perdebatan antara dikau dan wulan hahaha
btw btw wulann met kenalll:):)
wahhh loe mengerti kata2 gue ...
*tosss*
-kabur-
Lisiani -> dia berharap cowonya yang bacain bait kedua itu buat dia
Adhit bawel -> lu berharap cewe itu baca bait2 lu ini
Ujay -> koreksi ke Adhit
Lisiani -> kabur spy ga menimbulkan perdebatan
Ira -> abis uts ML, nunggu topsus, memulai lagi perdebatan dengan membuat summary comment2 sebelumnya. Yosh!!
Setuju ama Ujay, the more I read it, the more I love it!
-> lisiani:
Ooo.. gitu toh.. kalimat lo yang ambigu tuh Cha.. Gue kira salah tik :P
-> ira:
GJ lo ra. Sip gue dapet satu penggemar lagi :D
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